- Paisley Brown
- Release Date
- December 2013
- Book 1 of Sex Boot Camp
Erotic Romance, GLBT, Ménage or more
A week away...
After a hectic month at work, Cara expects to spend the next few days relaxing in her pajamas. Until her boyfriend surprises her with a getaway to a remote location.
To open her mind...
When she arrives at Sex Boot Camp, she anticipates her boyfriend will be by her side. Instead, she is left with a houseful of curious young women and a sexy instructor.
And fulfill desires she never dreamed of...
Although reluctant at first, Cara becomes entangled in a world of seduction and wicked fantasies.
Caution: This story contains an Alpha leader who ensures his guests leave satisfied, hot woman-on-woman action, and an MFM ménage that will leave you breathless.
Book Review by Delta (reviewer)
Jul 24, 2014 [ OFFICIAL REVIEW ]
136 people found the following review helpful
SEX BOOT CAMP is a short erotic novella that will make you want to be a camper! Join Cara and her hot sexcapades as she learns to let loose and go with the flow.
Cara Taylor is ready for a few days off, but instead she finds herself headed to a Sex Boot Camp, courtesy of her asshole boyfriend Braeden. Increasingly irritated by Braeden's domineering attitude but not one to pass up a holiday, Cara agrees to go, if only to put the final nail in their relationship coffin.
Upon arrival, the couples are separated and quartered alone. What Cara sees at the Sex Boot Camp is shocking...women hooking up with each other...oral sex class with real male volunteers, a life-size and an anatomically correct sex doll....but she can't bring herself to cheat on Braedon, no matter how big of a douche he is. Until she sees him wholeheartedly enjoying the female volunteers on the men's side of camp. Cara seeks solace in Daemon, the camp coordinator, and her roommates Veronica and Natasha. But on her final night of camp, the delicious Daemon has a surprise in store for Cara, and he won't let her leave without showing her every pleasure he can.
SEX BOOT CAMP is a quick and dirty read fans of erotic novellas will love. The writing was fast paced and succinct, and though there was little actual plot, the story wasn't too bad. Ms. Brown gets the point across that Cara's boyfriend is a jerk but she's still faithful...until she sees proof that he's not. I liked how she went from not succumbing to temptation to going balls to the wall with her experiences! From masturbation to double penetration to luscious lesbian lovin', SEX BOOT CAMP has a little something for everyone's erotic tastes.
The ending made me shake my head in confusion, as it was completely unexpected and slightly odd. I would've preferred a few extra pages of storyline on that little nugget than for it to come from left field as it did. That said, the ending made me want more of Cara and her exploits after graduating from camp! I would definitely love to read a sequel to SEX BOOT CAMP, if Ms. Brown puts one out.
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Sep 09, 2014 [ OFFICIAL REVIEW ]
121 people found the following review helpful
A free get out of jail card to have sex with other people whilst in a committed relationship is something some people want. To have a few days off spending it in an orgy like environment is even better! This is, unless your boyfriend springs it on you out of the blue and you have no interest in an open relationship.
Cara just wants a few days off to rest and relax. She wants some quality time with her boyfriend. Instead, he drags her to a remote camp where he's separated from her. The camp is to educate her on how to be a better lover.
The premise of this story is hawt. The camp itself is interesting and sounds like a blast. The sexual training in this story is also decent. What makes this a difficult read is the loathsome characters. Cara's boyfriend, Braeden, is an asshat. This is clear from the beginning of the story to the end. That's okay since it's clear he's the one the readers are supposed to hate. Cara is pathetic and whines too much. So her boyfriend wants to cheat on her--better to know now than later. Her attitude and how she treats others in this story is juvenile and petty. She's a brat and really needs to be spanked. It's understandable she's hurt and mad. Apparently her lack in age excuses her to be mean when others are only trying to make her feel more welcome. This is what killed the story for me.
The twist at the end came out of nowhere. This character which was previously never introduced just magically showing up is abrupt. Being never fond of deus ex machina, this ending feels forced to me.
My recommendation is to have a little more set up with this character at the beginning. Or even in the middle, have Cara flashback to a scene with the new character. Another suggestion is to write the story in third person. When the female lead is immature and bratty, having it in first person will cause a reader to subconsciously try to associate their own character with the female lead. This generally tends not to work well and causes a reader not to enjoy the book as much. This is because many female readers don't have the same tendencies to be quite so annoying. And if they did, they don't want to be reminded how they could be coming across to others. When the female lead is written in third person, it feels more disassociated.
Overall, the concept of this story is good. The sex is good. The characters were a bit rough.
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